In the Nov. 24, 1999, episode of the TV series
"The West Wing," White House correspondent Danny
Concannon, who is sweet on presidential press secretary
C.J. Cregg, asks presidential aide Josh Lyman if
there are any special things C.J. likes.
Josh thinks a moment and says, "Goldfish."
And sure enough, Danny soon shows up in
C.J.'s office with a goldfish swimming in a baggie.
And we all laugh along with C.J. as she
explains what we all knew: The "goldfish"
she likes are the cheese snack crackers.
The scene was as predictable as jelly
following peanut butter onto a 5-year-old's
Wonder Bread. But it was charming, it was
perfect for both characters and it provided a
nice break amid the whirlwind of interlocking
dramas that made "West Wing" the best show on TV.
That was then. With only two shows left in
the 2001-02 season, alas, the "West Wing"
news is not so good. When it's clicking, it's
still the best show on television, and that includes
"The Sopranos." Too often this year, it has not clicked.
Too often, creator and writer Aaron Sorkin
seems to have run low on good ideas and
been unsure how to handle the ones he has
had. Too often, it's felt like he's been riffing
while he tries to remember the song.
He trapped President Jed Bartlet in a
lurching story about whether Congress
would censure him for concealing his
multiple sclerosis. This produced a few fine
scenes, like that of Bartlet's chief of staff
Leo McGarry testifying before Congress. It
also produced weeks of meandering before
Sorkin seemed to wake up one day and say,
"I'm sick of this." So he dumped the whole thing,
along with at least two subplots — Leo's drinking
and Mrs. Bartlet's losing her medical license.
It was the "West Wing" version of the
"dream year" on "Dallas." Suddenly we
were expected to carry on as if the previous
few months never happened.
In fact, there have been several disturbing
signs this year that Sorkin has been writing
from whim as much as vision.
Take romances. Josh Lyman finally got a girlfriend.
Josh's assistant, Donna, got a boyfriend. The President's
assistant, Charlie, had been dating the President's
daughter. Even workaholic Leo had a date, with his lawyer.
And then each of these squeezes just suddenly
seemed to disappear. Is there some singles
bar where they're all hanging out, waiting
for the phone to ring?
Now, with any ensemble cast, players come
and go. In serial television, life is cheap.
But romance isn't the only area this year
where it has often felt as if Sorkin is darting
about, grabbing this and that and hoping it
will somehow come together.
"West Wing" always has had snappy
dialogue. That's fine. We would expect its
cast to speak snappily. But whole passages
this year were snappy just to be snappy.
They were riffing.
Presidential counsel Sam Seaborn is a
serious guy. He spent a whole show
obsessing over discontinuing the penny.
Josh forgot about a national crisis when he
saw a Web site about himself. Aide Toby
Zeigler, the most serious guy of all, spent a
recent episode acting as if he had inhaled
nitrous oxide.
Now, if "West Wing" were otherwise taking
care of business, these could be goldfish moments
- charming breaks that humanize the participants.
This year, those moments felt like Sorkin admiring
his own cleverness, which is uncomfortable, though
not nearly as uncomfortable as his two special shows,
the first about 9/11 and the second featuring interviews
with real-life Presidents and their aides. Those shows
were awful, dripping with smug self-congratulation:
Look, everyone, we're such a good show that our
actors can lecture children on terrorism and
real-life former Presidents hang around with us.
A few scenes this year were simply bizarre:
Toby grilling the President about his father,
the First Lady inviting some gals to come
get drunk. There's a difference between
pushing the envelope in high creativity and
thrashing about in the mistaken belief that
clever writing can make any idea into
compelling drama.
All this said, "West Wing" remains quality
stuff. The character who ducked the
turmoil, Leo, remains brilliant, and the
show hasn't lost the basic elements that
made it good. It had enough high points this
year for cautious optimism about 2002-03.
But it would be nice if Sorkin takes a deep breath
this summer, avoids drug busts and refocuses on
what made the show work when a goldfish joke
was an accent, not a centerpiece.
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